Avoiding Homework

One of the many ways I avoided homework last semester was freewriting. Sometimes it was random thoughts or feelings, sometimes it was story ideas or scenes, and sometimes it was the skeleton of a poem.
This is the product of one of my assignment-dodging escapades. It's not a very good or long poem, of course. I only wanted to play with different uses of certain verbs, so I suppose it's more of a mental exercise than an actual poem. I read it over this afternoon and made some changes. What do you think?

                                                                       I make coffee

                                                                       I make promises

                                                                       I make faces

                                                                       I make change

                                                                       I take criticism

                                                                       I take walks

                                                                       I take aspirin

                                                                       I take time

                                                                       I break dishes

                                                                       I break hearts

                                                                       I break even

                                                                       I break out